I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mrs Walsh.
Hi its me Ruby,Your poem is really good but there is a mistake you wrote My mind remembers . I dont really get my mind remembers dot does that really make sense have a think but also it's a great poem From Ruby pcs
thanks for the comment Rudy i fixed it up
Hi its me Ruby,
ReplyDeleteYour poem is really good but there is a mistake you wrote My mind remembers . I dont really get my mind remembers dot does that really make sense have a think but also it's a great poem From Ruby pcs
thanks for the comment Rudy i fixed it up
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